Talk:Monet Hurst-Mendoza

The article is very readable and informative -- the only thing I would suggest to make it more readable is to put the remaining theaters (the ones following WP theater) in paragraph form with just one subheading "other theaters." It would make the article flow a little more easily and make her career timeline a little more as to what she's currently doing and what she has done in the past. The article is also clearly neutral and objective, which is good. There could be some more information (only if possible, of course) on the plays section. For instance, what was her role for those plays? Was she producer, director, or playwright? Additionally, if you have years when they were produced, that would also help. Lastly, I think you make it clear that Mendoza is deserving of an article by emphasizing her role in creating roles for women and her list of works, as well as her several awards. Just one minor note - the anecdote about Peter Pan is interesting, but is there any relevance to her career/artistic style or influence? I think that would make it a stronger piece of content if there was some more profound significance to it. Overall, nice job! Mxdong (talk) 20:38, 18 April 2017 (UTC)