Talk:Mongolia at the 2022 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 04:03, 2 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Hoping to get to this within a few hours. This is my first time reviewing a sports-related article, so please bear with me!  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 04:03, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
 * I think that should be all! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns so that I can know when to reevaluate. Thanks,  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 18:15, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Nice work on the changes and thanks for the fast response! I am now happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats!  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 00:32, 3 February 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check
Earwig says good to go.

Files
All images are relevant, good quality and copyright-free:
 * : valid public domain rationale;
 * : CC-BY-SA 4.0.

Prose
✅ except for "Could Cross-country skiing be expanded upon at all". I think it's fine and doesn't need expansion as the information is consistent with Mongolia at the 2018 Winter Olympics, 2010, and 2006, which are all GA.
 * Batmönkhiin Achbadrakh and Enkhtuul Ariunsanaa are both wikilinked a few times. Only their first mentions in the lead and body of the article need to be wikilinked.
 * In the infobox, unlink Batmönkhiin Achbadrakh in Flag bearer (closing).
 * "the nation had sent two cross-country skiers, which were" – change to "who were"
 * "The delegation's best finish in any event was 65th by" – I would include 65th of 95 here for added context to readers.
 * Unlink the second mentions of opening ceremony and closing ceremony in Background.
 * Could Cross-country skiing be expanded upon at all? For instance, possibly how they were selected?
 * I would remove the first table (with the athletes) as unnecessary.
 * Ah, I see!

Refs
All sources used are RS. Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 1, 5, 8, 10, 13 or 17.

✅ I think, although I'm not quite sure what you mean by "Find better publication names"?
 * Find better publication names for the refs with urls (like www.olympics.com/).
 * I would remove the location parameter from ref 2 as this is the only such ciation.
 * Using names instead of URLs, like www.olympics.com > olympics.com or www.fis-ski.com > International Ski Federation etc.
 * I see what you mean, I'll go do that, do you want me to wikilink them as well?
 * That is up to the article writer, but you have already wikilinked the refs for the International Olympic Committee, The Independent and Olympic Council of Asia so I would say yes. Also just noticed ref 10 is formatted "International Olympic Committee (IOC)". Using or not using the abbreviation are both acceptable but make them all consistent :)

✅ I think I fixed all the refs.

Pinging LunaEatsTuna.

Other
Navs, cats and most other templates good.

✅  MasterMatt12  💬 ● 📝 23:22, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Move the short description to the very top of the article
 * Recommend adding template:Use X English
 * Please add WP:ALT text where possible