Talk:Monster (Gabbie Hanna song)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) --Kyle Peake (talk) 04:53, 27 July 2019 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good
 * "October 26, 2018 simultaneously" → "October 26, 2018, simultaneously"
 * Not sure if encore should be wikilinked
 * "prominently features Hanna belting" → "prominently features Hanna belting a line"
 * It is not solely a line, and I think this suffices for the lead.


 * Mention the lyrical theme
 * It is mentioned: "The lyrics of "Monster" explore the theme of losing friends and self-analysis"


 * "was uploaded onto" → "was uploaded to"
 * "the same day of the singles' digital release" → "the same day as the single's digital release"
 * "It features her" → "The video features her"
 * "hinting at her suicide" → "hinting at Hanna's suicide"
 * Remove wikilink to suicide as this is definitely overlinking
 * "experienced minor success" → "experienced minor success"
 * Where is the change??


 * "on Billboard" → "on the Billboard"
 * "In early December 2018" → "In December 2018"
 * "There, she performed" → "During her interview, the singer performed"

Background and composition

 * "released for digital download on" → "released for digital download in various countries on"
 * "song, featuring her" → "song, which includes her"
 * Should Carpool Karaoke be wikilinked actually?
 * Yes, indeed.


 * "that initially she had chosen" → "that she initially chose"
 * "During the lyrics, Hanna explores" → "Hanna uses the lyrics to explore"
 * Remove wikilink to imagery
 * "...that just doesn't work." remove speech marks as they are not needed since we know it's a quote from the style

Internet meme

 * "sounded not meshed."" → "sounded not meshed"." consistency
 * Remove WikiLink to YouTube

Music video

 * "was uploaded onto" → "was uploaded to"
 * "and was directed" → "which was directed"
 * "she takes out matches out" → "she takes matches out"
 * "as both make eye contact" → "as the two make eye contact"
 * "Hanna chases her" → "Hanna chases the girl"
 * "shots show the singer" → "shots show her"
 * "as well as her either" → "as well as either"
 * Remove wikilink on suicide, again

Track listing

 * Good

Charts

 * "Monster" Version → "Monster"

Release history

 * Territory → Country

Final comments and verdict
Though has gone on holiday, I will leave this on hold still as it would be unfair to fail it when there's not major issues as the user announced their holiday after my review. --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:03, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Decent work here, for now. --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:18, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review. I have responded to the comments. Greetings; Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:35, 4 August 2019 (UTC)

Will gladly ✅ this now! --Kyle Peake (talk) 19:21, 5 August 2019 (UTC)