Talk:Monster (Kanye West song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jennie--x (talk · contribs) 21:31, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

Initial Comments

 * Lead
 * The lead is four paragraphs long which is the maximum for an article of any size. This article isn't particularly long; could this be merged and edited to comply with WP:LEAD? Three paragraphs would probably be sufficient enough


 * Background


 * Composition
 * "In his deepest, most intimidating voice" sounds very journalistic and certainly isn't encyclopedic, this needs changing.


 * Reception


 * Music video


 * Charts and Release History


 * References

Overall Summary
Fixed the lead, and removed the questionable sentence. Bruce Campbell (talk) 21:14, 4 September 2012 (UTC)