Talk:Montagu Toller/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 01:01, 15 February 2023 (UTC)


 * I will get to this (hopefully) later today—UTC wise.  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 01:01, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
 * All done! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns below. Thanks,  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 16:16, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
 * All done! Ping! Harrias  (he/him) • talk 16:33, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Nice work! Happy now to pass this article for GA status per your changes. Congrats!  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 17:19, 16 February 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check
Earwig says good to go.

File
The image used is appropriate, of acceptable quality and copyright-free:
 * : valid public domain rationale.

Prose

 * Both counties mentioned are wikilinked in § Life but not in the infobox.
 * Linked. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * I am sure you have searched extensively, but are there any RS sources on who his mother was?
 * Sadly not. Based on Ancestry, I can tell you she was Mary, but even with that information, I haven't been able to find a RS to support it. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 16:16, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * I see. Thanks for trying!  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 16:39, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * I would wikilink Brighton as a good chunk of non-English readers are likely to not recognise it.
 * Linked. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * The sentence starting "He played second-class cricket" is on the longer side. I think "and during the 1895 season" could be split into its own sentence.
 * Split and trimmed. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good.
 * Add a citation to the efn note.
 * Any update?
 * Sorry, I did independently remember that I'd missed this! Added now. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 17:04, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * It happens! I happened to be online when you pinged me :)
 * "By the end of the 1897 season Cricket" – I believe this needs a comma?
 * Added. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)

Refs
Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 2, 6, 7, 10 or 15. I have access to BNA. Formatting:
 * The title of ref 9 is missing a space.
 * Added. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)

Other
Short desc, section formatting, external link and cats good.


 * Recommend adding WP:ALT text to the image with the  parameter.
 * Added. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 10:00, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Nice work!