Talk:Monterey Peninsula Water Project

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Brent, you're killing it! You're doing a great job! What you have written so far seems pretty detailed and complete, as far as I can tell. Obviously, you're still editing the "Desalination" section and I have no doubt that you're going to crush that. I'm not sure how many sources you can find for a topic like this, but as you can imagine, if you can find more that would strengthen the heck out of your article.

Hey Annalise, thank you for the feedback. I will try and incorporate more sources, as I know that will improve the quality of my wiki page. I also need to address a few more subheadings in order to lengthen my page as well. Overall thank you for the advice Annalise, and I hope to make large improvements thanks to you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brenttare (talk • contribs) 22:39, 6 May 2016 (UTC)