Talk:Montrose Music Festival

Flagging for second pair of CE eyes
This article was tagged with advertisement and needing update. Here's what I boldly did:
 * Removed peacock terms and unsourced peacock claims.
 * Removed external links placed in the body of the article leading to band websites (the general website won't serve as RS for the claims of their appearances, so those links don't make the article stronger.)
 * Flagged dead citation links
 * Flagged failed verifications
 * Flagged for citations needed
 * General CE for grammar, sentence structure, punctuation and spacing issues

I'm adding a CE tag so that another member of the Copy Editors Guild can have a pair of eyes on this article. If it is sufficiently cleaned of promotional content, then let's remove the advertisement tag. I'd like someone else to take a look and see what they think. Cheers, Curdigirl (talk) 00:19, 31 August 2019 (UTC) Curdigirl (talk) 00:24, 31 August 2019 (UTC)