Talk:Montserrat Calleja Gómez/Archive 1

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Hi here are some thoughts about your sandbox:
 * For a biography, you'll want to bold the name of the person in the very first sentence (just a standard Wikipedia convention)
 * Since she's still alive, all you need in the parentheses is her birth year. So you would have: Montserrat Calleja Gómez (born April 20, 1973) is...
 * Wikipedia section titles are written in "sentence case" not "title case", meaning that just the first word and any proper nouns are capitalized. So instead of "Early life and Career", you would have "Early life and career"; "Notable Publications" becomes "Notable publications"
 * Just part of the Wikipedia style guide, but citations directly follow punctuation, including commas, periods, and semicolons (Sentence.[1] not Sentence[1].) I see a couple instances of the latter form--you can just drag and drop the references to move them after the punctuation.
 * Another Wikipedia convention is that we avoid most titles, including academic titles "Dr." or Jane Smith, PhD. Instead of ...under the supervision of Ricardo García, Ph.D. you would just have ...under the supervision of Ricardo García
 * Everthing looks really well cited and verifiable! Well done!

Overall I think you just have a few minor style things to fix, which hopefully shouldn't take you very long at all. Nice work, and let me know if you have any questions. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:18, 19 May 2020 (UTC)