Talk:Moondance/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zwerg Nase (talk · contribs) 12:35, 11 September 2015 (UTC)

I will review this. Zwerg Nase (talk) 12:35, 11 September 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Just a couple of minor things here:
 * Background: In the second paragraph, you speak of him making a third record. Isn't it his second?
 * Blowin' Your Mind! was his first, Astral Weeks his second. Dan56 (talk) 10:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Music and lyrics: sense of intense intimacy is not NPOV. It also sounds like a quote. If it is, give it as such.
 * I attributed that phrase to the author of the source, Brian Hinton. Dan56 (talk) 10:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Same goes for largely impenetrable.
 * Attributed. Dan56 (talk) 10:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Release and reception: End of second paragraph: Is LP in small letters in the source?
 * Yes, but it should be allowed under WP:MOS to capitalize them anyway. Dan56 (talk) 10:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC)


 * You should give sources for track listing and personnel. I guess that can be found on the album's booklet?
 * Done, Dan56 (talk) 10:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC)

That's about it. I give the nominator(s) seven days to adress the issues. Good job so far! Zwerg Nase (talk) 09:04, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Looks good, it's a pass :) Zwerg Nase (talk) 11:27, 20 September 2015 (UTC)