Talk:Moonlight Madness (video game)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk · contribs) 07:07, 15 March 2012 (UTC)

Most interesting article which I am glad I reviewed. I've done a small copy edit: one repeated issue I see is comma splice, which I would recommend you take a look at (I found at least three comma splices). One thing I wonder is why you've added access dates for offline resources (they don't show up, but they are pointless). That aside, the article meets the criteria and I am happy to pass it. Arsenikk (talk)  07:07, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review. I will study the comma splices article and go and have a look at other articles I've worked on to make sure I'm not putting accessdates in offline sources, not sure how I've managed to do that. Someoneanother 14:18, 15 March 2012 (UTC)