Talk:Moral blindness/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:16, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 15:16, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * "after events" "after the events"
 * "wide ranging" "wide-ranging"
 * Add a serial comma after "ethical fading" in the lead.
 * Milgram and Zimbardo Stanley Milgram and Philip Zimbardo
 * "for deportation" "for the deportation"
 * The last paragraph in #Overview needs a source.
 * Add serial commas after "judgements" and "Hume".
 * Evil  Evil
 * "good" "good".
 * 18th century  18th century
 * trolley problem.  trolley problem.
 * The last two sentences from #In_psychology need sources.
 * "research focus" "research focused"
 * "developed upon to" "developed to"
 * "ZImbardo" "Zimbardo"
 * nature"” nature"
 * Add serial commas after "individual, situational", "politics", and "business ethics".
 * Add columns to the #See_also section.
 * With all that in mind, references are in good shape.

Progress

 * Thank you so much for your review of the page. I really appreciate the feedback and comments. I've made changes to the page in response to them so do let me know if anything looks amiss and if I need to make any other changes. Again, thank you for the time you put into this! Rianahen (talk) 23:14, 30 March 2021 (UTC)


 * FYI: User:Rianahen was a WikiEd student and has not edited since December. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  20:06, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Sorry about that! I've been away for a bit but will be on top of the page from now on. Rianahen (talk) 23:14, 30 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Looks great! Only things needed before I pass are removing the space between #See also and #References and fixing the link in the lead of Philip Zimbardo) to Philip Zimbardo (with the ")" outside as well).  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 23:22, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Yeay! Noted and done! Thank you! Rianahen (talk) 23:42, 30 March 2021 (UTC)