Talk:More than Friends (Inna song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:34, 18 June 2017 (UTC)

Full revew coming next weekend. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:34, 18 June 2017 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Fine, just remove house genre as the source is not reliable.
 * ❌ See below

Lead

 * remove house genre
 * ❌ The Times of India cites house; removed Radio Eska though


 * remove "but also criticized its release process." Unless they said something else as source is not reliable.
 * ❌ See below


 * four countries is not multiple countries → some countries including Poland, Romania and Spain (for example)

Background and composition

 * Eska.pl has nothing regarding the genre or instrumentation.
 * ✅ Removed


 * Please see below for unreliable sources.
 * Sample quality needs to be reduced see Manual of Style/Music samples.
 * I just meant the quality of the track not its length, but its fine. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:32, 25 June 2017 (UTC)
 * I just meant the quality of the track not its length, but its fine. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:32, 25 June 2017 (UTC)

Reception

 * Re-title the section as "Critical and commercial reception"


 * The Times of India's → should add the rating of the reviewer.
 * ❌ The rating is for the entire album, not for the single only
 * My bad then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:18, 23 June 2017 (UTC)


 * Remove "experienced success on record charts. It" → I wouldn't call it success

Music video

 * Replace the direct lyrics source with this one
 * ❌ See below


 * "Both clips were shot by Edward Aninaru at Venice Beach in Los Angeles" → remove youtube links the Romanian reference you have along with the one above will be good enough.


 * Same goes for the image.


 * "The visual opens with shots of the beach...Inna dancing to the track at sunset, and her taking a shower." → also add this to help with the description of the video.


 * I'm not sure regarding RnbJunk reliability, is quite questionable.
 * See below for my comment regarding this

Live performances

 * "She also opened the Untold Festival in 2016." → Irrelevant she didn't performed the song there.
 * ✅ Removed

Track listing

 * Collpase table for the digital remixes EP.
 * I don't know how to do this; could you help me?
 * Sure. I will redirect you to a page that has if its fine with you. . See the writers list.

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Credits and personnel

 * Engineers, mixers, recording, mastering?
 * ❌ Unfortunately not available, as for many other Inna songs


 * Places it was recorded, mastered, mixed?
 * Same as above

✅. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:16, 23 June 2017 (UTC)

Weekly charts

 * Everything is fine.
 * Thank you!

Year-end charts

 * Fine.

Certifications

 * Fine.

Release history

 * Short section including the process of release.


 * The last link has several remixes, such information should be added as it's not a stand alone release like the ones above.

Overall GA review

 * Good article, some fixes and I'll give it a second look. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:03, 22 June 2017 (UTC)
 * I greatly thank you for the review. I responded to all your comments. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 01:23, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Removed every bit about RnB Junk from the article... Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:26, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
 * I jsut left you a link to know how a collapse list works. I'll see everything later today or tomorrow. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:49, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
 * I collapsed the track listing. Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:43, 23 June 2017 (UTC)