Talk:Morgan Frost/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 15:04, 6 November 2021 (UTC)


 * I'll review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:04, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

Review

 * Are acronyms (OHL, AHL) needed in the lead if they are never used again? They are explained in the body anyways.
 * —  Ghost River  17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Fix the dash on 2018-19 OHL season WL so it bypasses the redirect
 * —  Ghost River  17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Fix WL on hat trick to bypass redirect
 * —  Ghost River  17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Recommend changing All-Star in Awards and honours to All-Star Game or All-Star Classic
 * —  Ghost River  17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

I have also changed the lede to reflect that (for the time being, at least) he's a prospect in the Phantoms and not a full-fledged Flyer. Really thought he'd make the team out of camp, but... —  Ghost River  17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

Continued review

 * Please mention Frost's mother Dana
 * You do not need ETA in brackets because it is never used again
 * Change Zach Senyshyn to Zachary Senyshyn to bypass the redirect
 * Everything has been addressed; thank you! —  Ghost River  19:57, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , passing. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:19, 9 November 2021 (UTC)