Talk:Morning/Evening/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 10:35, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Overall a pretty impressive article. Some points to be considered before I see if it can be listed as a GA.


 * File:Four Tet - Morning Evening album cover.jpg → should be made 300×300 pixels to comply with WP:NFCC


 * Hebden played some of the records and began experimenting with sampling Indian playback singer Lata Mangeshkar's voice, looping a sample for three days --> Hebden played some of the records and began experimenting by playing a vocal sample of Indian playback singer Lata Mangeshkar for three days,
 * ✅ I went with "looping" here, to avoid repetition of 'play'. I hope that's OK.


 * and decided to break the album into a --> Not "break", replace it with "divide"


 * coupled with complex drum programming[5][4] --> Avoid such instances where the ref 5 is coming before ref 4


 * to emphasise evening's relationship with nightclubs --> add "an" before evening, because you are not referring to evening here as a person, rather any evening's association with the night
 * ✅ Good spot!


 * The song fades out --> link to Fade (audio engineering)
 * ✅ Good idea :)


 * No marketing campaign was used --> Such stub sentences are not desriable, why don't join it with the next sentence as a contrast: "Although no marketing campaign was used, Hebden performed... "
 * ✅ OK


 * from his page --> I assume this is a webpage? if so link it
 * It's linked in the 'external links' section. I didn't see the need to link it in the article, since the cited source #1 covers what is said in the prose. How do you think I should link it - by inserting an external link into the text? Or by using it as a straightforward (primary) source?


 * The critical response section is Immaculate
 * Thanks. I had some fantastic help from !


 * Remove Guardian news and media from the ref 1 and ref 17 publishers. You don't need to add publisher for same Work parameters


 * Use en-dash in place of normal dash in the reference titles.
 * ✅ I think I've got all of these now...


 * Please note to make online sources with non-original content like AllMusic and Metacritic as non-italicized. Conversely, online sources with original content can remain italicized like Pitchfork Media etc.
 * I've always been unclear about the guidelines for this. AllMusic qualifies as 'original content' though, surely? Not done (yet)
 * ✅ Actually, I think these are done now.


 * Please note that you can actually remove all the publisher parameters, since it is now depreciated.
 * ✅ I didn't know that. I've left one in for the liner notes cite - should this be removed also? Thanks!

Let me know once they are taken care of. — I B  [ Poke ] 13:43, 8 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for an excellent review . I've got most of these covered already - will complete the rest shortly. Cheers! — sparklism hey! 14:11, 8 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Great work. I'm happy to pass the article now. — I B  [ Poke ] 16:05, 8 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks IndianBio! :) — sparklism hey! 16:12, 8 March 2016 (UTC)