Talk:Morral affair/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:21, 18 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a short description and then WP:ALT text for every image.
 * Alt text is not part of the GA criteria but noted
 * "afterwards" "afterward" (American English)
 * Both are AmEng
 * That link sends you to "afterward". See Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:53, 19 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "bouquet of flowers" "flower bouquet" (simply "bouquet" would also work because "bouquet" means an "arranged bunch of flowers" so "bouquet of flowers" is repetitive).
 * Add a serial comma after "antigovernmental curriculum".
 * "its antimilitary, antireligious, antigovernmental curriculum and other subversive activities" antimilitary, antireligious, antigovernmental describes the curriculum here so it's not a list of items
 * "antianarchist journalist" "anti-anarchist journalist"
 * "regarded himself an outspoken enemy" "regarded himself as an outspoken enemy"
 * "told the investigation" - reword
 * "a bombs expert" "a bomb expert"
 * Remove the comma after "June 1907".
 * "kangaroo court, – make a WP:CITEBUNDLE.
 * "judgement" "judgment" (American English)
 * Both are AmEng
 * ...but judgment is more common for American English. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:54, 19 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:06, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , done! Thanks for the review czar  18:36, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , re: the American English notes, Merriam Webster (and for that matter, NOAD, my preferred-yet-unlinkable AmEng dictionary) allow both terms interchangeably—see the "variant" section. I'd rather go with the official dictionary than thewordcounter.com, which has no hallmarks of source reliability. czar  01:30, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi, checking back czar  01:19, 27 July 2021 (UTC)