Talk:Mortal Folly and Mortal Recoil/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khanassassin (talk · contribs) 18:34, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

Ayo, foo', I'm 'bout to take a look @ dis article so get ready 4 da review. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:34, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

Lead
 * Perhaps link "Mortal Recoil" in the last paragraph? Everything else is fine, though. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:35, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:32, 5 September 2013 (UTC)

Plot
 * "interrupted by the Ice King, who gets trying to get Finn and Jake's blessings to date Bubblegum." I think you know what's wrong here, haha. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:51, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Whoops. Fixed.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:32, 5 September 2013 (UTC)

Production
 * Everything's cool here, actually. Good work. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:51, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

Reception
 * Although I copy-paste from the the "Mortail Recoil", it's good. Have you considered merging the articles: you would keep the reception section pretty much the same, while making an overall beefier article, and the two episodes are tightly connected anyway. Only a suggestion though, it would make sense. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:51, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 * It's true that the last paragraph is very similar; most reviewers saw the episodes as kind of one. However, the production section might be a little hard to redesign, since each episode was storyboarded by a different team of writers, and so they each talked about their respective episodes in the commentary. If I can't find any more episode-specific reception articles, I may very well have to merge.

References There's one citication eror (ref. #13), but it's cool. Not a part of this section, but an external section would be cool; not mandatory, though. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:51, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 * I think its fixed now.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:32, 5 September 2013 (UTC)

Fix all of these up, and you shall pass. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:51, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 * I think I fixed or explained all the issues.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:32, 5 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Cool, me gon' pass dis artikel. Passin it yo. --Khanassassin ☪ 14:35, 6 September 2013 (UTC)