Talk:Moshing/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crowz  RSA  00:50, 12 January 2011 (UTC)


 * I am going to have to fail the article for the following reasons:
 * YouTube isn't a reliable source.
 * References need cleaning up, as there are bare references, and ref 11 and ref 8 needs more info
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”.
 * "Origins of the term" → "Term origins"
 * "Origins of the dance" → "Dance origins"
 * Too many bold terms throughout the article.
 * Surly there is some infobox for the article
 * Quotes should have a reference directly after the quote.
 * References should only go after punctuation.
 * There are several things that go unverified.
 * A thorough copy-edit is needed before it can ever pass.
 * There are several more problems throughout the page. I suggest a Peer Review.


 * Sorry, Crowz  RSA  00:50, 12 January 2011 (UTC)