Talk:Moto Hagio/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Benji man (talk · contribs) 18:14, 26 November 2022 (UTC)

Great article! Besides the text, I thought the illustrations in particular were exceptionally good.

I have a few questions about referencing:
 * Brient (2013) seems to take most of his factual data from another article, cited in his first footnote. Would it be better to refer to that directly for those facts?
 * Per their footnote, it looks like Brient is pulling from a few sources in addition to the Thorn article. For simplicity's sake, I think it might be best to keep it as-is. Morgan695 (talk) 22:49, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
 * I had the impression that not all of the events in the Biography section were sourced. Did I miss those references? If not, they should be added (or certain details should be removed).
 * Re-stated some references for clarity's sake. Morgan695 (talk) 22:49, 2 December 2022 (UTC)

This should be easy enough to fix, so I'm putting the review on hold for 7 days. Good luck!


 * Hi, thanks for taking up this review. I've acquired a copy of The 50th Anniversary of The Poe Clan and the World of Moto Hagio and am going to use it to update the list of works in the article; I'll ping you once I've done that and implemented your other notes. Morgan695 (talk) 18:48, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, response above. Morgan695 (talk) 22:49, 2 December 2022 (UTC)