Talk:Mount Berlin/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:34, 5 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Link glacier, maybe? They're becoming less and less common.
 * Per MOS:OVERLINK, I don't think you need to link Antarctica, especially not twice in the lead
 * Link Marie Byrd Land Volcanic Province, it looks like it should probably be capitalized, too.
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Geography
 * "and 1994 - 1995" - Per MOS:DATERANGE, use an endash and no spaces.
 * Flood Range is overlinked multiple times
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Geology
 * Marie Byrd Land is a duplink, as is mafic and ignimbrites
 * " Ignimbrites are rare in Marie Byrd Land, the outcrop on the southeastern flank of Mount Berlin is a rare exception" - Semicolon, not a comma
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Local deposits
 * Tons of overlinks in here: Merrem Peak, pyroclastic, tuffaceous, obsidian, pumice, hyaloclastite
 * Is there a way to link or gloss welded vs. unwelded?
 * Done, only through a Wiktionary link. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Composition
 * Lots of duplinks here, too: Mafic, Mefford Knoll, Wedemeyer Rocks, Brandenberger Bluff, basanyte, and trachyte
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Eruption history
 * Duplinks: Wedemeyer Rocks, Mount Takahe, West Antarctic Ice Sheet, Mount Moulton, Mount Waesche, ice cores, West Antarctica
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Chronology
 * "It may correspond to a 443,000±52,000 lava at Merrem Peak" - Lava what? Lave flow?  Lava dome?  Lava tube?
 * Doesn't specify, presumably lava flow. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Argon-argon dating appears to be overlinked.
 * Vostok is overlinked
 * Link Siple Dome at the first mention, not the second. It's also overlinked in here.
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Categories
 * It's in Category:VEI-5 volcanoes, but that does't seem to be mentioned anywhere in this article.
 * Removed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

That's it, I think. Placing on hold. Hog Farm Bacon 23:39, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Done so far. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)