Talk:Mount Edziza/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:25, 25 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments to follow soon. ♦ JAG  UAR   13:25, 25 March 2024 (UTC)


 * what's going on?? this sat here for the whole of april. 750h+ 09:25, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I'm very sorry for the delay - life has been very hectic lately. Will finish this now. ♦ JAG  UAR   15:53, 15 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "is a stratovolcano in Cassiar Land District of northwestern British Columbia" - is this not missing a definite article ('the')?
 * "The third and fourth stages 0.9 million years ago" - 900,000 years ago?
 * ""Thick trachyte flows were issued during the fifth stage 0.3 million years ago" - likewise, 300,000 years ago


 * Body
 * "A period of volcanic activity 0.3 million years ago deposited the Kakiddi Formation which also truncates the Ice Peak Formation." - same here, in the Stratigraphy subsection. Is there a technical reason why these are preferred?
 * "Most of the Buckley Lake to Mowdade Lake Route is marked by a series of rock cairns from Tsekone Ridge onwards" - cairns has already been linked in the article

I've read through the entire article and am impressed by the usual standards. As a result I can find nothing holding this back, so will pass this outright. Apologies again for the delay. ♦ JAG  UAR   16:13, 15 May 2024 (UTC)