Talk:Mount Kenya/GA1

GA Review
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I am reviewing this article's good article candidacy, and will have a full review up shortly. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 01:22, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

My review is complete, and I have decided to place the article on hold for the following reasons:

I have seven concerns with referencing/inline cites:
 * All the references in the History section are in the last paragraph.
 * Added references and moved some information to more appropriate sections.Mehmet Karatay (talk) 07:49, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Last paragraph in the European discovery has no reference.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 08:18, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * First paragraph of the 1931 to present day section has no reference.
 * Added reference Mehmet Karatay (talk) 09:25, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * I think that the second half of the single paragraph in the Gĩkũyũ section needs a reference because
 * The Ameru section has no references.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 21:58, 14 May 2009 (UTC)


 * The fourth paragraph in the zones section has no references.
 * Added reference Mehmet Karatay (talk) 09:25, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * The first paragraph in the Flora section needs a reference.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 09:50, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * The second paragraph in the Fauna needs a reference.
 * Added reference Mehmet Karatay (talk) 09:50, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * The first and paragraphs in the Seasons section need references.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 21:58, 14 May 2009 (UTC)


 * The first two paragraphs in the Chogoria Route have no references.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:03, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * The first paragraph of the Naro Moru Route section needs a reference.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:13, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * The second paragraph in the Sirimon Route section has no reference.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:13, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * None of the huts Around the Peak Circuit Path have references.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:41, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Among the Huts on Chogoria Route, Meru Mt Kenya Lodge and Minto's Hut have no references.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:51, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Among the Huts on Chogoria Route, Sirimon Bandas and Liki North Hut have no references.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:51, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Among the Other huts around the mountain, Mountain Rock Bantu Lodge, Naru Moru River Lodge, Naro Moru Youth Hostel, and Rutundu Log Cabins have no references.
 * Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:51, 11 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Among the Books about Mount Kenya, only Fuga sul Kenya/No Picnic on Mount Kenya have references. Indeed, I am not sure this section is even necessary, and removing it would be completely fine with me.
 * Hid this section. It can be put back in if anyone wants to improve it. For now I will focus on the other points. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:21, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

And three regarding coverage/comprehensiveness:
 * For the Kamweti Route, has anyone investigated why the route is the way it is, or why it may be impassable?
 * Updated this section. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 19:47, 14 May 2009 (UTC)


 * The table in the Climbing routes is not complete; see for example the climbing seasons column.
 * Completed the table. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 20:01, 14 May 2009 (UTC)


 * There is nothing about the geology of Mount Kenya; what kind of rock is it made out of? What is its possible eruptive history (for example, was it explosive, effusive, and so on)?
 * Added section on geology. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 19:31, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Once these are fixed I will be happy to promote the article. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 06:06, 10 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Thank you for reviewing this article Miss Madeline. I have fixed all the suggestions you made. If there is anything else you feel needs work please let me know and I will try to sort it out. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 21:58, 14 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Apologies for the delay in promoting it, but I think it meets the criteria now, so I am promoting it now. Good job and keep up the good work. In the meantime you might want to review some other GA nominee. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 18:12, 18 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Thank you. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 19:30, 18 May 2009 (UTC)