Talk:Mountain kingfisher/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:30, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * What is "rufous"?
 * Reddish-brown color, added link.


 * "It is .." vs "They also..." sing -> pl, any reason?
 * Clarified, it was supposed to refer only to adult males.


 * "loral patches" what?
 * Linked.


 * Don't know what a culmen is.
 * Added link.


 * "clutches of 2" two.
 * Fixed.


 * "to New Guinea. It is found through" merge.
 * Done.


 * "between altitudes of" at elevations between...
 * Done.


 * "Mountain kingfisher has been designated as the official common name by the International Ornithologists' Union (IOC). The species is also known as the greater yellow-billed kingfisher or mountain yellow-billed kingfisher." unreferenced.
 * Added refs.


 * "the genus Syma, along" link Syma first time.
 * Done.


 * "nominate subspecies" link?
 * Done.


 * "lumping the two" is that really the technical term?
 * Yeah, see here.


 * " ... 21–24 cm (8.3–9.4 in) in length." unreferenced para.
 * Added ref.


 * "can look similar" is similar in appearance.
 * Done.


 * " 3-4" en-dash.
 * Fixed.


 * "small lizards, insects, and larvae" you only linked larvae in the lead...
 * Fixed.


 * Link IUCN in the article. Indeed, explain what it is, it's not clear to non-experts.
 * Added link, but I don't think that an explanation is necessary as the Red List is pretty well-known.


 * Dates in references should be consistent format.
 * I added a date to the Journal fur Ornithologie ref, are there any others with errors? AryKun (talk) 10:10, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

That's it for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:02, 27 September 2021 (UTC)