Talk:Move Like This/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mattg82 (talk · contribs) 02:37, 18 February 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * 1b) The lead is rather short, it should be expanded. The iTunes edition track listing should ideally be in the same track listing format as the Best Buy edition.
 * 2b) Minor issue: ref 17 has not details, publisher, accessdate etc
 * 3a/b) A few things a missing from this article. It could do with a chart table. Release history? was the album released in other countries? Any additional personnel, producers, engineers etc? Maybe include a bit more about the tour? Include a music sample perhaps?


 * This is a small and tidy article, a refreshing change from articles on pop culture albums, which are behemoths and never hold my attention. Holding until these quibbles are fixed and the article filled out a bit more. Mattg82 (talk) 02:37, 18 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Hi Matt. Thanks for the feedback so far; I will have some time this weekend to work on the issues you brought up, so stay tuned! Thanks again, 28bytes (talk) 02:54, 18 February 2012 (UTC)

Fixes so far: I'll tackle the rest tomorrow. 28bytes (talk) 21:47, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Audio sample added
 * iTunes tracklist formatting made consistent with other tracklists
 * Ref 17 filled out
 * Tour section expanded
 * Production & engineering information added
 * I have expanded the lead a bit and added a chart section. There doesn't appear to be anything to add regarding the release date(s): it was released worldwide in CD and digital download formats on May 10, 2011, and I can't find any sources that discuss any other release dates. I think that addresses your comments; please let me know if I have missed anything. 28bytes (talk) 18:48, 19 February 2012 (UTC)
 * OK looking good. One final nick-pick, I would remove the section headers from Album and Singles, then replace it with a semi-colon. ===Albums=== to ;Albums ===Singles=== to ;Singles This will still make them bold headers but it will remove the out of place edit tag.


 * I will leave this open for a few more days before passing to see if any opinions from other editors appear, cheers. Mattg82 (talk) 00:13, 21 February 2012 (UTC)


 * A good suggestion; done. 28bytes (talk) 00:18, 21 February 2012 (UTC)

Passing article, nice work. Mattg82 (talk) 22:43, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you! 28bytes (talk) 23:58, 26 February 2012 (UTC)