Talk:Moxviquil

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 August 2020 and 11 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Martinezwhite. Peer reviewers: Digit2334.

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Given the article seems to only have the lead section currently written, I will be mostly be critiquing that part.

The lead section is clear and concise. It gives a gives a nice introduction to the article and what it will be detailing. Once the draft of the article is more fleshed out, the lead section would be improved with a bit more elaboration on the history of Moxviquil and its larger importance on history and archaeology.

I would also recommend creating distinct sections for the article like "Early History," "Downfall," or whatever headings are relevant to your research to create a more distinct organization.

Since the content is little, I cannot comment on the balance of perspectives, but current voice is neutral and does not force a narrative upon the leader.

The first two sources seem to be reliable sources, peer-reviewed journal articles, and the last two sources seem to be tourist guides or informational pamphlets about the site. Overall, the sources are well-chosen.

My main critique is the article just needs to be fleshed out with more information and sources before I can give a more substantive critique, but it looks like you are on the right track.

Sidenote:

I know school and the current environment is overwhelming, so thank you for doing your best in the current moment. I just wanted to let you now this critique is coming from a place of grace and understanding. I hope you have a great week!Digit2334 (talk) 01:24, 26 October 2020 (UTC)