Talk:Mr. India (1987 film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:11, 12 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:11, 12 May 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * No issues with the non-free use rationale.
 * Is there no secondary source for the runtime?
 * This BBFC link will direct you to a 1988 film of the same name, but the cast is entirely different. So, it must be a different film. I use the version that was provided on YouTube, you can search it by yourself if you want to see it. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:31, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
 * The link --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:13, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "The film's principal photography, which was handled by Baba Azmi, was shot in" "Principal photography, handled by Baba Azmi, took place in"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:59, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * Plot is under 700 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * Remove the comma after "ends meet".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:09, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after "Seema, Calendar".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:09, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * No issues with #Cast.

Production

 * "consisting Salim Khan" "consisting of Salim Khan"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "given with the role" "given the role"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the hyphen between "future-wife".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "choreographer and action director" "choreographers and action directors"
 * I have added respectively. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "character become invisible" "character invisible"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Recite sources at the end of each quote per WP:QUOTE.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Everything thing else appears to be properly sourced.

Soundtrack

 * "2.5 million cassettes sold according" "2.5 million cassettes were sold, according"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after "Aiyyaa (2012)"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * "released in Blu-ray" "released on Blu-ray"
 * Removed --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after Pritish Nandy.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Legacy

 * Change uses of "..." to "[...]"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "Kapur said".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "As parts" "As part"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Sequel

 * "(who died in January 2005) before have affected the production" "(who died in January 2005) affected the production"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Drive by comments
Which source states that this film is based on The Invisible Man? I thought it is not an adaptation of the novel, except for featuring the protagonist having the powers of invisibility. Kailash29792 (talk)  13:59, 19 May 2021 (UTC)