Talk:Mr. Monk and the Actor/GA1

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 22:24, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Grabbing this for a review over the next few days. Miyagawa (talk) 22:24, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

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Discussion

 * Plot
 * "his first trip vacation since the murder of his wife" - I think that "trip" is redundant in this sentence.
 * "a film about him will be done" - perhaps "a film will be produced" instead?
 * "only stolen few money and a wristwatch" - can you rephrase, I'm not sure about "few money".
 * "believing he is Monk, tells Leverett is the killer." - I think you're missing a word there.


 * I've had another look, and I think those points above are the only issues with the article. Miyagawa (talk) 08:00, 4 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks, . If that's all, I think I've already done it. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 15:39, 4 July 2015 (UTC)