Talk:Mr. Perfectly Fine/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 09:05, 3 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 18:26, 14 June 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I will complete a review within one week. -Riley1012 (talk) 18:26, 14 June 2024 (UTC)

1. Well-written
 * It has been highly ranked among her best "From the Vault" tracks. "highly ranked" and "best" seems redundant.
 * Removed "best". I didn't remove "highly ranked" because all of the rankings of the vault tracks cited in the article placed the song within the top 10.
 * Swift explained that these songs were left out of Fearless for various reasons, and that including them... Comma is not needed.
 * Removed
 * ...and displays him as indifferent of the situation... Change "of" to "to"
 * Changed
 * Zoe Haylock of Vulture wrote that the it was "a 2008 time capsule". remove "the"
 * Removed
 * "Mr. Perfectly Fine" climbed and peaked at number 30, when it begun at number 90. change "begun" to "began"
 * Changed

2. Verifiable Copyvio check highlights properly attributed song lyrics and quotes. The article uses reliable sources- Bustle (WP:RSP) is fine in this context.
 * Spot check:
 * No issues: 3, 6, 9, 13, 21, 28, 31, 41, 42, 51, 53, 58, 61, 70
 * After signing a new contract with Republic Records, Taylor Swift began re-recording her first six studio albums in November 2020. Source 2 doesn't mention the new contract was with Republic.
 * Added Source 3; I think that's explicit enough
 * It looks like source 16 doesn't list all of the songs anymore, add an archived link.
 * Changed to Capital FM source for better navigation and faster loading

3. Broad The article is broad and focused.

4. Neutral The article is neutral.

5. Stable The article is stable day-to-day.

6. Illustrated The image and the audio have non-free use rationale and relevant captions.

Only a few edits needed, happy to pass once they are done. -Riley1012 (talk) 01:29, 20 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi @Riley1012! I have addressed all of your points above. Gained (talk) 03:13, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your quick response, I will pass this! -Riley1012 (talk) 11:52, 20 June 2024 (UTC)