Talk:Mrs. Freshley's

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"Honeybuns were first invented by Howard Lee Griffin in Greensboro, NC. Griffin, a small bakery owner, originally made pies until he began experimenting with new recipes including the Honeybun.  He developed the recipe in our family kitchen on Walker Ave.  My father, Howard Lee Griffin sold his bakery, Griffin Baking Company to Flowers Bakery for a considerable amount of stock.  That company continues to make the honey bun even today." This is totally uncited, too informal, and not in encyclopedic voice. Most obviously, Wikipedia does not have a family to be able to refer to "our family kitchen". Rephrase and cite before readding. --Khajidha (talk) 19:35, 13 December 2017 (UTC)