Talk:Muhammad VII of Granada/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 11:24, 6 May 2019 (UTC)


 * I have made a few copy edits, which you will want to check.
 * Thanks, they all look nice. HaEr48 (talk) 14:02, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Note a: why are sultan, king and emir in italics?
 * Because they are "words used as words" (MOS:WAW). Is it not correct?
 * Well now, you are probably right. Silly me!


 * "Henry III blamed Muhammad VII for the breakdown of the truce and summoned his Cortes to Toledo in December 1406.[20] While negotiations was underway, Henry III became ill and died on 25 December." Do the "negotiations" refer to negotiations with the Muslims, or within the Cortes?
 * With the Cortes (to support his planned war). Does this help?
 * It does.

HaEr48 (talk) 14:02, 6 May 2019 (UTC)

Gog the Mild (talk) 11:24, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking a look, . Let me know if you have more suggestions. HaEr48 (talk) 14:02, 6 May 2019 (UTC)

And done. A fine piece of work. Possibly the simplest GAN I have done. Gog the Mild (talk) 14:10, 6 May 2019 (UTC)