Talk:Mujhse Dosti Karoge!/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 03:30, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 03:30, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Improve the non-free rationale for the poster with this template.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:00, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Other than that, the infobox looks great.
 * Add a comma after Rani Mukerji and "Pooja Sahani (Mukerji)".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:00, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot

 * "Pooja, Raj and Tina" "Pooja, Raj, and Tina"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "attracted Tina" "attracted to Tina"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "with via e-mail" "with him via e-mail"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "her name".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "despite of being" "despite being"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "realises" "realizes"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "apologise" "apologize"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Plot is under 700 words, so they're no problems with WP:FILMPLOT.

Cast

 * Instead of citing the same source for every character, might I suggest adding a simple "Credits adapted from Bollywood Hungama." to the top of the section?
 * ❌ Because there are source I cited from Rediff.com and Box Office India. The actor who plays young Tina does not mentioned on Bollywood Hungama, as well as Raja Vaid. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:21, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * "on 1996" "on the 1996"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "Mukerji, Roshan".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "stars in the film, because" "star in the film because"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "looks was the" "looks were the"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The reference after "Yash Raj Films" doesn't say Aditya Chopra was a producer.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * In the second paragraph, can you explain when the actors were cast?
 * No sources or links mentioned that. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "more ... about" "more [...] about"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Soundtrack

 * "described its soundtrack" "described its soundtrack as"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "mixed response" "mixed responses"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * Remove the comma after "across India".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "total grossing" "total gross"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "(US$4.7 million)".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "It was opened" "It opened"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The last sentence should be moved to #Critical_reception, which should be retitled #Reception.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * Remove the comma after "of the leads".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "part as a" "part as"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)