Talk:Multi-Payload Processing Facility

Hello! I'm am so very sorry this review is coming so belatedly. I don't know how this got missed.

There is some good technical information here. What you'll want to work on for B-class is structure and ease of reading. Since we're not contractors, the physical dimensions of the building are among the least important qualities to detail -- what you want to start with is a summary of why the thing exists and how it got to be there. Then a physical description. Then an operational summary.

I went through the same phase when I started. :) You've got information; now it's time to attractively package it.

Welcome to Spaceflight and, again, so sorry this took so long. You can find us on the Discord server -- then we can give you real-time advice.

--Neopeius (talk) 14:10, 18 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the helpful feedback! I'll try and do some restructuring, maybe pop-in to the discord when I have a chance. Sadly it'll probably be a while. I don't have as much free time these days as I did when I first wrote this. Still, really appreciate the tips, and I'll see what I can do, whenever I can actually get around to doing it. – Jadebenn (talk &middot;&#32;contribs &middot;&#32;subpages) 07:46, 19 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Any time! Again, sorry about the delay. You might find my recent LES-1 and OV2-1 articles instructive. :) --Neopeius (talk) 23:24, 19 February 2020 (UTC)

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Nice work!.

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