Talk:Multiclavula mucida/GA1

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Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 20:10, 23 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments
A fascinating and very entertainingly written article on a strange-looking lichen.


 * "club lichen": I thought that was Cladonia? But that's the trouble with vernacular names.
 * Maybe you're thinking of "cup lichens"? Anyway, it made me go back and look at sources, which made me realise that "club lichen" is also used as a common name for the entire genus, so I added that fact. Esculenta (talk) 19:21, 24 March 2024 (UTC)


 * A question more than a comment: the lichen is very pale, and (I learn) the algae are clumped into globules rather than being scattered. This is reminiscent of the clumped configuration of chromatophores, which makes them seem less colourful. Is that what's happening here, that the quantity of algae is typical for lichens but the distribution is different?
 * As is alluded to later, mycologists/lichenologists have historically disagreed how much of a lichen this species is, as there isn't algae in the fruiting bodies, only in the scummy thallus. But it's agreed that this algal scum needs to be there for the fungus to grow, and Masumoto identified the photobiont. So to answer your question, yes, there's an unusual distribution of photobiont in this lichen. Someday I'll make an article on borderline lichens which will further explore the edge cases of symbiotic fungal-algal relationships. Esculenta (talk) 19:21, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Ah, how very interesting!


 * At the end of 'Habitat and distribution', the "Moreover, ..." connective doesn't work as there is no relationship between the habitat loss issue and the wide documentation. You could reorder the sentences to make it work better.
 * Reworked this part. Esculenta (talk) 19:21, 24 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Is "primeval forest" just a synonym of "old-growth forest"?
 * Yes; I used both ways of saying it in the article prose so a reader would not be confused by the lesser known synonym used in the source title and text. Esculenta (talk) 19:21, 24 March 2024 (UTC)


 * You use the form M. mucida in 'Description' but then switch back to the full name in the later sections. Suggest we use the short form there.
 * Done (if not starting paragrah/sentences). Esculenta (talk)


 * It feels a bit lumpy to start the 'Current classification' with the name of a different genus.
 * Tweaked prose to address this. Esculenta (talk) 19:21, 24 March 2024 (UTC)


 * "first identified this species an extratropical lichen" -> please add "as".
 * Fixed. Esculenta (talk) 19:21, 24 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Is this British or American English? "Colour" or "moldy"?
 * British, fixed. Esculenta (talk)

Images

 * Love the 'scum lover fruiting gregariously', must try to use that somewhere!


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