Talk:Murder Legendre

More sources
I need help in getting sources for this new page Rytuyityu (talk) 15:58, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

Article needs much more work
Has this page been accepted by New Pages Patrol? In my opinion, it does not reach WP quality. It describes a character who appeared in only a single film, for which there is already an article, and so the character's notability looks dubious. It seems to have been written 'top down' and is now asking for sources, rather than being built up from the citations. The bulk of it, the Life section, is an expanded version of the White Zombie film plot from a different POV, and that article already has a Plot section. The other sections here could be added to the White Zombie article. The grammar, punctuation and spelling are poor, and it reads like a fan blog rather than an encyclopedia article. I think this page should be sent back for substantial rewriting in draft, especially to demonstrate notability outside the film and why Legrange should have his own article. Masato.harada (talk) 14:28, 18 December 2023 (UTC)