Talk:Murder of Stephen Oake/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: NuclearWarfare (talk • message • contribs • count  • [/wiki/Special:Log?user= logs ] • email) 19:00, 2 September 2011 (UTC)

The references should all be properly formatted per Citing sources, and the lead should be a more comprehensive summary of the article. Cite news can help you with the former if you're not sure how to do that. That needs to be done before any more detailed review is done. I am going to close this review for now until that is worked out; please let me know when you finish that so I can tell you if it would be worth renominating it. NW ( Talk ) 19:07, 2 September 2011 (UTC)