Talk:Murders of Rick and Suzanna Wamsley

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I just wrote this page as one of my first projects. After writing it, I realized it is more about all the people that conspired to murder the Wamsley family, rather than about Andrew Wamsley himself. I thought it would be better to name it "The murder of Rick and Suzanna Wamsley". How would I rename it now? Allycat1208 (talk) 20:19, 16 July 2011 (UTC)

Missing investigation and arrest
At least half the story is missing, so what distinguishes this case from any other and makes it a notable murder is lost in the telling. The article doesn't introduce us to the victims very well, nor explain how the conspiracy arose or unfolded with any history or sequence of events building up to the murder event and the offenders subsequent behaviour to disassociate themselves from the crime. Nor does it explain how the murder came to the attention of authorities, the offenders came to be identified, arrested, what charges were laid against them or the court hearings and verdicts. Instead we jump from a motive for murder to conviction and gloss over the whole judicial process in between. I don't think the article really reflects how justice is done in Texas. - Cameron Dewe (talk) 08:52, 31 March 2021 (UTC)