Talk:Murray Deaker

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 * "he is very knowledgable on all sports that are played." - This seems like a statement of opinion and is not encyclopedic. A hyperbole at the least.

The article is not poorly written but statements such as "Here he took a long time off to have a break and play lots of golf." and "He wrote about his depression very thoroughly in his second book "Just an Opinion"." do not, to me, carry a a well formulated encyclopedic tone. Kiwi Ace 08:40, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

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