Talk:Mushroom ketchup/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 03:50, 8 March 2016 (UTC)

GA criteria
: With the issues outlined below having been addressed, the article complies with MoS with regards to grammar, as well as layout/structure. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 06:51, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
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: The article refers to and makes thorough use of a number of reputable sources. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:54, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
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: The article covers all encyclopedically relevant aspects of its topic. No detection of irrelevant details. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:53, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
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. The article maintains an unbiased approach to its subject. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:52, 16 March 2016 (UTC) . The revision history shows that at this time, the article has not been subjected to edit warring or disputes for at least several months. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:22, 10 March 2016 (UTC) : All three images used in the article are appropriately licensed for easy use in Wikipedia, and all three serve relevant illustrative purposes in this particular article. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:21, 10 March 2016 (UTC)
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Comments

 * Seeing as the line "Several species of edible mushrooms are usable in its preparation," from paragraph 1 of "Preparation", is surrounded on both sides by sentences worded in past-tense, wouldn't it better to put that sentence in past-tense as well?
 * This also goes for the first sentence in "Use in other condiments".
 * I have copy edited the article, and believe that issues with tense have been resolved. I have also copy edited for organization, whereby historical information is now mostly under a "History" header 2 section. North America1000 00:50, 17 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Also in that paragraph, when it says, "The version in The English Art of Cookery lists dried mushrooms to be used for the ketchup's preparation," I'd personally recommend opting for such wording as "... calls for dried mushrooms to be used..." instead. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 10:04, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
 * ✅. Makes sense. North America1000 00:51, 17 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Checks out, now! :) Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 06:50, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

The article now qualifies as GA. Congratulations! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 06:51, 3 April 2016 (UTC)