Talk:Music Sounds Better with You/GA2

GA Review
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Nominator: 12:41, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Reppop (talk · contribs) 05:31, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

Hello. I will be reviewing this review. I'm a bit of a fan of the single, as well as the trio's individual electronic works. Will probably be doing the bulk of it tomorrow, or at least throughout the week. reppop talk 05:31, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

Comment: I hate to be a negative Nancy, but I don't think any of those prose suggestions are improvements. They all involve adding words of the sort I routinely remove when copyediting articles. For example, this suggestion:

"They wrote more lyrics, but discarded them." – Add "initially" between "They wrote" and replace "discarded" with "decided to discard" for a little more clarity.

It's obvious that they wrote the lyrics before they discarded them, as the reverse would be impossible, so "initially" doesn't add information or clarity. Likewise, it goes without saying that they decided to discard them; the reader won't wonder if they discarded them by mistake if we don't say otherwise. Popcornfud (talk) 12:30, 11 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Honestly, even I was a little worried when putting them as I saw that its pretty clear on its own. You probably have way more knowledge of doing these things, so would you suggest me getting rid of those? reppop talk 18:07, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
 * I've gone through the suggested edits again and made a few tweaks to the article. The ones I haven't implemented are suggestions I don't agree with.
 * Just for the record, I'm (probably) responsible for most of the writing in this article, but I didn't nominate it for GA — I'm not particularly bothered about GA/FA noms. So feel free to pass or fail or whatever you think is best. Cheers. Popcornfud (talk) 10:03, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your comments, and I'm fine with your disagreeing with my suggestions. reppop talk 18:33, 12 June 2024 (UTC)