Talk:Music as a coping strategy

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In the article "Music as a coping strategy", I added a paragraph about the effects that music can have on a person who has been suffering from borderline personality disorder. This is a very serious psychological condition that can cause a lot of distress if it is left untreated. Having BPD can effect a person's ability to enjoy relationships, work, school, or any other aspect of life. Music can help people that are diagnosed with having borderline personality disorder because the music is enough distraction to take attention away from other aspects of their life that might be overwhelming. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Leenasears (talk • contribs) 05:19, 27 March 2019 (UTC)

Each sentence is nicely written and supported by a reliable source. The language of the edits is neutral and standard. The student did meet the length and source requirements. However, she needs to make sure her information on the sandbox is match up with the actual article because the citations of the sources aren't included in the sandbox.Fanchi.wu.1 (talk) 14:20, 28 March 2019 (UTC)

While well written, the sub-section on music as a coping strategy specifically for those with Borderline Personality Disorder is not properly sourced which makes it unreliable. If the author placed a source with the same findings as the paragraph then it would be perfect. Janiseg1031 (talk) 03:57, 29 March 2019 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 January 2019 and 3 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Victoria.bacon.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:45, 18 January 2022 (UTC)