Talk:Music for a Time of War/Archive 1

Reminders
-- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:29, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
 * which works are italicized and which are designated with quotation marks?
 * once established, be consistent throughout article
 * track listing displayed correctly?
 * single reception section, or separate sections for program and album?

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 * I have requested a peer review for this article, which remains incomplete but feedback would be helpful. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:09, 29 November 2012 (UTC)

Following my request for a copyedit by the Guild of Copyeditors, the article received a review from User:Lfstevens. Much appreciated. My review of changes made to the article:
 * diff 1 ✅
 * diff 2 ✅
 * diff 3 ✅
 * diff 4 ✅
 * diff 5 ✅
 * diff 6 ✅

I agree with these changes to the article, except I don't see the need to create this subsection. Thank you, Lfstevens, for taking time to offer a review of the article. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:07, 5 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Also, I removed the "Spring for Music Festival" subsection, which I do not believe is necessary. A single "Performances and broadcasts" section seems appropriate. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:33, 5 February 2013 (UTC)