Talk:Music of Final Fantasy XV/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: PresN (talk · contribs) 02:37, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

I guess since this is the first FF music article I had no hand in writing, I'll review it instead!


 * This is all pretty darn solid, with only small tweaks needed
 * "Originally a spin-off title called Final Fantasy Versus XIII,[a] Shimomura was brought on board in 2006" - Reads as Shimomura originally being FFV13. Insert "on board 'the project' in 2006" to provide the relevant noun.
 * "Her music, [...], incorporated" - incorporates, the music still exists so its present tense. Same with "featured Latin lyrics" and "which acted as"
 * It's a little messy calling "Somnus" the main theme and "Stand By Me" the theme song; I think adding in "official" would clear it up as it's not an issue in the development section
 * "Final Fantasy XV was her very first time composing for" - no need for "very"
 * "Shimomura worked on around 80 of the music" - missing a "percent"
 * "was "Somnus", at that time the official theme song.[2][4] "Somnus", originally the game's theme song" - duplication
 * "reflected the subject matter" - reflects, unless it doesn't reflect FF15's themes but only FFV13's
 * "Initially, due to its status as a spin-off, she did not" - restate as "Shimomura" since you haven't mentioned her for a few sentences and this is a new paragraph
 * "Welch's contribution is notable as theme songs have" - Final Fantasy theme songs
 * "orchestrated and conducted by Eric Schmidt, produced by Koyo Sonae, while Daniel Kresco" - "and" produced
 * Should probably have tracklists, though I can't exactly complain, seeing as I agreed to put those in myself months ago. Will come back and do it soon after this review concludes.

That's it; all the prose for the rest of the page is more "formulaic" by necessity and thus dodges most potential grammar problems, and I didn't see any issues. Everything else is following in the tracks of the prior music articles, so no worries there. Thanks for taking this on; I still haven't played the game so I never got a chance to even consider working on this article before you jumped out with it already mostly done. -- Pres N  02:37, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I've done my best to address all the issues you raised. --ProtoDrake (talk) 09:25, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Alright, passing! -- Pres N  12:35, 8 March 2017 (UTC)