Talk:Music of the Mother series/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  C  anniba loki  20:16, 7 December 2009 (UTC)

Checklist
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

--  C  anniba loki  20:27, 7 December 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * "EarthBound, known in Japan as Mother, is a role-playing game series created by Shigesato Itoi for Nintendo. The series started in 1989 with the Japan-only release of Mother, which was followed up by Mother 2 for the Super NES in 1995, known outside Japan as EarthBound. A second sequel was released in Japan only, Mother 3, for the Game Boy Advance in 2006." EarthBound is known in Japan as Mother and Mother 2 is known outside Japan as EarthBound? Clarify please.
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * The files were provided, but its use is questionable. The audio sample of the song "Love Theme" has a fair use rationale for Mother 3, but is not been used in that article. I think this sample do not meet the non-free content criteria.--  C  anniba loki  04:26, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * The article have a low-quality image for the first soundtrack, 1989's Mother, but I think this image has been used only to decorate the infobox. Its importance is not being discussed in the article. The album cover shows the word "MOTHER" in a shade of green over a red background; the letter "O" of "MOTHER" is replaced by an image of planet Earth, also with a greenish tinge.--  C  anniba loki  04:26, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * On hold for a week.--  C  anniba loki  04:26, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Passed. All issues fixed, this article meets the Good article criteria.--  C  anniba loki  19:17, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * The files were provided, but its use is questionable. The audio sample of the song "Love Theme" has a fair use rationale for Mother 3, but is not been used in that article. I think this sample do not meet the non-free content criteria.--  C  anniba loki  04:26, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * The article have a low-quality image for the first soundtrack, 1989's Mother, but I think this image has been used only to decorate the infobox. Its importance is not being discussed in the article. The album cover shows the word "MOTHER" in a shade of green over a red background; the letter "O" of "MOTHER" is replaced by an image of planet Earth, also with a greenish tinge.--  C  anniba loki  04:26, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * On hold for a week.--  C  anniba loki  04:26, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Passed. All issues fixed, this article meets the Good article criteria.--  C  anniba loki  19:17, 8 December 2009 (UTC)

Comments

 * "Some pieces from the soundtrack such as "Eight Melodies" and "Pollyanna" were reused in various forms [What forms?] in the other games in the series."


 * "Some of the music from the game was released as an album [an album, soundtrack or soundtrack album?], Mother, by CBS/Sony [Linked to Sony Music Entertainment Japan?] on August 21, 1989 with the catalog number 32DH-5285 ." Is the catalog number relevant or even encyclopedic?


 * "It consists of eleven tracks, seven of which are English vocal arrangements of songs from the game, and has a total duration of 1:03:47. The arrangements that were done [created?] by Suzuki, David Bedford, Takeshi Saitoh, and Michael Nyman."


 * "The album was re-released on February 18, 2004 by Sony Music Direct with the catalog number of MHCL-341 . The tracks on this release are digitally remastered, a twelfth track from Earthbound was added entitled "Smile and Tears", and "The World of MOTHER" was replaced with a version that was six minutes longer. The re-release has a length of 1:15:49. " The soundtrack was reissued on February 18, 2004 by Sony Music Direct with its tracks digitally remastered, a song from Earthbound entitled "Smile and Tears" was added, and the track "The World of Mother" was replaced with a version that is six minutes longer.


 * "The album was well received..." [Are you sure of this?]


 * "In a different Famitsu interview [We really need to use this kind of wording?], Shigesato Itoi said..."


 * "Suzuki has estimated that he composed over 100 pieces of music for EarthBound, including songs that did not make it into the game, and says that his favorite was the bicycle music, which he had actually composed before starting work on the game ." What is bicycle music?


 * " Mother 2: Gyiyg no Gyakushū (MOTHER2ギーグの逆襲?, lit. "Mother 2: Gyiyg Strikes Back") is The soundtrack album for EarthBound . The album was released by Sony Records in Japan on November 2, 1994 with the catalog number SRCL-3024 ."


 * " The album's 24 tracks have a duration of 59:49; many of the tracks are arrangements combining several pieces from the game into one piece. [The album has 24 tracks, where many of these tracks are arrangements combining several pieces from the game into one piece.] The final three tracks on the album consist of remixes of multiple tracks merged together; for example, "Room Number (PSI MIX)" is a remixed version of several "shop" and "hotel" themes combined into one song." When you wrote the example, it simply made the sentence confusing. What are several "shop" and "hotel" themes?


 * "A combined soundtrack for the collection, Mother 1+2, was released by Toshiba-EMI on August 20, 2003 with the catalog number of TOCT-25125. This single-disc album contained 26 tracks and spanned a duration of 1:01:28 ."


 * "Another album for the collection, Mother 1+2 midi Piano Version, was released three years later on May 27, 2006 by Sky Port Publishing with the catalog number of SPCD-001; The album contained MIDI piano arrangements by Shunsuke Sakamoto of songs from the two games, with its music covering many different moods, from "lively to sedated". Like the soundtrack album it contained 26 tracks, but with several different tracks than the first album. The music selected for arrangement covered many different moods, from "lively to sedated". The album had a length of 55:38, and like the first album had its first ten tracks from Mother and the other 16 tracks from Earthbound. " Like the soundtrack album, Mother 1+2 midi Piano Version had its first ten tracks taken from Mother and the other 16 from Earthbound, but with several different tracks than the first album.


 * "On November 2, 2006, the MOTHER3+ soundtrack album was released by Tokyo Itoi Shigesato Office with the catalog number HOBO-0004. The album contained ten tracks from the game with a total duration of 28:50. It was also released in the iTunes Music Store on February 2, 2007, featuring an additional bonus track, "MOTHER3 – theme of LOVE-", though this album has since been removed from the iTunes store. The MOTHER3+ soundtrack album was first released by Tokyo Itoi Shigesato Office on November 2, 2006, and then distributed through the iTunes Music Store on February 2, 2007, featuring an additional bonus track, "MOTHER3 – theme of LOVE". Another album of music from the game, MOTHER3i, was released on February 6, 2007 by Tokyo Itoi Shigesato Office in the iTunes store and other online music services. This album contains 15 tracks with a total duration of 1:05:55, and Like the Earthbound soundtrack album, each track of MOTHER3i is a combination of several tracks from the game itself, though it still does not cover all of the tracks from the game."