Talk:Mutiny! (Set Your Goals album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 23:49, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Genre: See on overall

Lead

 * Fine

Background and production
✅
 * The group supported the release with a full US tour, then separate east and west coast tours later in the year. → Make it more clear these are two tours.

Composition

 * Fine

Release and touring

 * released on May 27 → year?
 * "San Francisco-based positive-hardcore band Set Your Goals just finished up their new video for "Mutiny!," the first single off their upcoming debut album, Mutiny!" → first single. Mention it on the infobox and lead as well
 * I feel this is a case of the publication simply calling the song a single because it had a music video, despite it never being released to radio (or separate digital release e.g. on iTunes), which is why I didn't mention it in the lead/infobox. Yeepsi (talk) 15:58, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I know that can happens often, but still if they called it a single, we can't say otherwise, unless you find a source calling it just "song", "track" or something in that vein. Otherwise it needs to be added as a single. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:17, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

✅

Reception and legacy
✅
 * Retitle "Reception"

Critical response
✅
 * Mutiny! was praised by most music critics. (first sentence before all the reviews)
 * Punknews → first paragraph
 * Ox-Fanzine → second paragraph

Accolades and aftermath

 * Fine

Track listing

 * All song written by, produced by?
 * The booklet doesn't list any writing credits. Added produced by. Yeepsi (talk) 15:58, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

✅

Personnel

 * Fine

Charts

 * Fine

Overall

 * The sputnik review is quite a bit all over the place regarding genres. I do believe the genres should be pop punk and pop, per "The result is really just pop/pop punk music". Thoughts?
 * I wouldn't object to adding pop, but the only downside is that IPs would remove it repeatedly. Yeepsi (talk) 15:58, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Add the source to the infobox, it will support pop as a genre. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:18, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * If that happens you can always revert.The source covers it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:22, 17 April 2020 (UTC)


 * You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:13, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Done. Yeepsi (talk) 15:58, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Added single and pop genre. Yeepsi (talk) 18:38, 17 April 2020 (UTC)