Talk:Myōjin Yahiko/GA1

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

I am promoting the article to a GA status because I feel it passes the above. If you disagree please feel free to seek a reassessment. Great job Tintor2. MS  (Talk | Contributions)  15:24, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the review ^_^.Tintor2 (talk) 15:26, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Lead

 * You should change "practise" to "practice". I'm basing this off of google hits and some user might be confused, IMO. I was at first.
 * English-language should not be linked, see WP:OVERLINKING. I believe people who use the English Wikipedia would know what the English-language is.
 * Kamiya Kasshin-Ryū should be in the nihongo tag. Since you have the translation for his other attacks, you should add the translation for Kamiya Kasshin-Ryū.
 * Done.Tintor2 (talk) 12:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Creation and conception

 * I noticed that this section doesn't have that many sources. Does the one source provided in this section for each paragraph cover the whole section?
 * Yes, The author has a whole page to talk about the creation each character from the series.Tintor2 (talk) 12:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Well could you use the thingy to cite some the sentences?


 * Done, (I think so).Tintor2 (talk) 15:08, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Personality

 * A source for "Tokyo Samurai" would be great. Also since it is a title it should be in quotes, not apostrophes.
 * Since Kamiya Kasshin-Ryū is mention here first it should be in the nihongo tag.
 * Done.Tintor2 (talk) 12:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Techniques

 * Take Kamiya Kasshin-Ryū out of the nihongo tag.
 * Done.Tintor2 (talk) 12:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Reception
Once the concerns above have been addressed contact me and I'll decided whether it passes or fails. MS  (Talk | Contributions)  01:52, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Second not 2nd.
 * Done.Tintor2 (talk) 12:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)