Talk:My Boxer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 20:26, 21 February 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * Release year in brackets for "Wish Bone"
 * Robyn, Santigold, and Gwen Stefani → no comma before "and"
 * was released on 12 July → you should mention that it was released on 12 July 2013

Infobox

 * flawless ;)

Background and composition

 * through the help of Spin → how did they help her?
 * While creating music for Oh Land's third record, Wish Bone (2013), she wanted → While creating music for her third record, Wish Bone (2013), Oh Land wanted
 * that has duration → that has a duration

Critical reception

 * Paul MacInnes acclaimed the song → "applauded" is better to use here

Music video

 * The official music video for → Better: An accompanying music video for

Copy-violation

 * 43.5% is too much! Please look at the first source and try to reword it.

Links

 * No problems here!

Outcome
Brilliant article! for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I have addressed all of your concerns. If you take a look at the copyvio template, you will notice it is such a high number only because the block quote in the article is from that website. That shouldn't be a problem; block quotes are used all of the time. Please let me know if anything else should be done. Thank you, Carbrera (talk) 00:03, 3 March 2017 (UTC).
 * Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 05:19, 3 March 2017 (UTC)