Talk:My Name Is My Name/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 05:44, 11 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Prose
 * Lead
 * The infobox should state the album was released October 7 as the standard is to just list earliest release date.
 * Done. STATic message me!   21:07, 11 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Background
 * "which is executive produced by Kanye West"..... this sounds awkward, try something like "which Kanye West produced".
 * "In July 2012, the Virginia native" and "the Virginia rapper" would read better as just "Pusha T" or "the rapper".
 * "Hip Hop Since 1987" should be italicized, linked with a URL, or have quotation marks. Otherwise it looks like he was speaking on the matter since 1987.
 * The "pain" in "Actually, there is a line in "Pain" where I say 'My name is my name', that line comes" should have ' rather than ".
 * Not sure what you meant exactly, did I do it? STATic message me!   21:07, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Better, though the part on Kanye producing it still sounds awkward. Try "his solo debut album, which was produced by Kanye West, and at the time included"..... XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 21:57, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Look good? STATic message me!   23:26, 11 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Release and promotion
 * Per MOS:PUNCT and MOS:QUOTEMARKS, there are some uses of curly quotation marks/apostrophes in the third paragraph after the quote which should be replaced with straight apostrophes. i.e. ’ → '
 * Done. STATic message me!   21:07, 11 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Critical response
 * Again, curly apostrophes/quotation marks that should be replaced with straight ones. All three paragraphs of the section.


 * Accolades
 * Once more, curly punctuation should be replaced with straight punctuation. Both paragraphs of the section.


 * Track listing
 * Names of people involved only need to be stated in full once.
 * Done for all producers where their real name is also their stage name. STATic message me!   21:14, 11 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Sourcing
 * No problems here


 * Coverage
 * The "Commercial performance" section should be expanded. I would recommend a total of at least three paragraphs.
 * Due to there not being much commercial success of the album, there is not really much to comment or report. It only received in-depth coverage on the US sales, which are covered as much as they can and all international chart positions are already stated. STATic message me!   21:14, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
 * At the very least, it shouldn't have two incomplete paragraphs. If there isn't any more significant information for now, it's probably best to combine them to one paragraph. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 21:57, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Alright done. STATic message me!   23:26, 11 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Neutrality
 * No problems here


 * Stability
 * No problems here

GA Pass
Good work fixing this up! I'm passing. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 23:31, 11 March 2014 (UTC)