Talk:My Truth/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:34, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

Comments a really good piece of work this.
 * Five sentences starting "Robyn co-wrote all fourteen songs ..." are quite "factoid", they don't flow so well, any chance you could consider merging a couple of them to enhanace the readability?
 * I can only count two of those sentences! Re-wrote the one in "Background", don't know if it is better or not. Pancake (talk) 10:08, 15 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Same comment applies to the Composition section, e.g. "David Schmader of The Stranger opined that it features a directness that is "unprecedented in pop".[13] Schmader compared its piano..." could easily become "David Schmader of The Stranger opined that it features a directness that is "unprecedented in pop",[13] and compared its piano..."
 * "sixth months " six months.
 * ""Electric" was released as My Truth‍‍ '​‍s lead single on 29 April 1999.[20] The CD single included both the radio edit and the extended album version.[21] The single became Robyn's third top-ten entry on the Sverigetopplistan singles chart,..." "single" used four times in quick succession, consider a reword or merger to reduce the repetitiveness.
 * ""Play" managed to peak at" -> ""Play" peaked at..."
 * Should Joyzine be italicised?
 * Don't think so, just a website not a magazine. Pancake (talk) 10:08, 15 July 2015 (UTC)


 * "brilliant " is this a quote? If not it's a little POV, if so please "quote" it.
 * The writer used the word lysande, a synonym to the Swedish word briljant, which means, obviously, "brilliant". It's quoted now. Pancake (talk) 10:08, 15 July 2015 (UTC)


 * "Lucas did review the album on behalf of AllMusic.[8] Lucas wrote" either "He wrote..." or merge, "Lucas did review the album on behalf of AllMusic,[8] writing..."
 * "Swedish Recording Industry Association (GLF) for sales of 40,000" you've already abbreviated the GLF, so just use the abbreviation rather than explaining it again.
 * Any reason to make the "Certifications" table sortable when it contains precisely one entry?
 * I used the Certification Table templates, is it possible to make them unsortable? Pancake (talk) 10:08, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

As I said, excellent stuff, I'll put it on hold while these minor issues are looked into. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:31, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your review and your kind words! I will begin dealing with these issues in a day or two. Pretty busy at the moment! Pancake (talk) 16:04, 11 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Good work, sorry it's taken a while to get back to you. I'm happy to pass this as a Good Article. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:50, 28 July 2015 (UTC)