Talk:Myasthenia gravis/GA1

GA Review
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This article does not meet the Good article criteria and has therefore failed. Issues include:


 * The lead is too short. Please expand it to better summarize the entire article, per WP:LEAD.
 * Too much information is unreferenced, including:
 * Most of "Signs and symptoms"
 * Entire " Pathophysiology" section
 * " Associations" section
 * Most of " Treatment" section
 * References are placed incorrectly; they should be after all punctuation marks with no spaces in between, per WP:FN.

Please renominate the article once these issues have been resolved. Gary King ( talk ) 05:51, 31 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Some sections must go: associations is unsourced, and the content on pregnancy and children can be merged elsewhere. For sources I would use the recent Lancet review for clinical aspects and J Clin Invest for the molecular pathophysiology. Good work by Pizza so far. JFW | T@lk  13:01, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for looking into it! (i've been editing it for so long that i've become rather blind to its flaws) Pizzaman79 (talk) 15:59, 1 August 2008 (UTC)