Talk:Myles Kennedy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk) 23:24, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

Hello! I am the reviewer, AJona1992. Please address the following concerns so this article be a GA, thank you.


 * The Mayfield Four disbanded in 2002. After declining an offer to audition as the lead vocalist of Velvet Revolver -why?


 * He has released three studio albums with Alter Bridge -explain a little (have any of the album made it to music charts and record sales can help)


 * Since early 2010, Kennedy has been touring extensively, switching between tours with Alter Bridge and Slash, his two main projects. He also has a solo album that he hopes to release in 2012 -remove extensively and hopes, why was he switching between tours?


 * as well as a collaboration album with Slash to be released also in the future -explain?


 * According to his profile on the Internet Movie Database, his father, Richard, died when he was four years old and his mother subsequently went on to marry a minister -removed this sentence which is based on OR


 * He states that he spent a lot of time in the summer on vacation with his family at Lake Coeur d'Alene -explain? or removed too ORish


 * He attended Mead High School and, finding musical inspiration from Led Zeppelin, Marvin Gaye, and Stevie Wonder, began playing trumpet at the age of ten and guitar at fifteen, listening to Led Zeppelin records and copying the playing style of Jimmy Page. -Run on and source?


 * He found his singing voice by listening to his parents' Marvin Gaye and Stevie Wonder records, and also states that he subconsciously was influenced by Robert Plant. -re write, source, explain, and remove subconsciously.


 * He played guitar in the school's jazz band and trumpet in the marching band. -re write, source, why?
 * After graduating in 1988, he enrolled in Spokane Falls Community College to study music -why?


 * In "Personal life" section too many run ons "he said, she said" and "In an interview with, at".


 * Discography section needs to include all studio albums that Myles was on.

AJona1992 (talk) 23:24, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Filmography section needs sources.