Talk:Nå skruva Fiolen/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

I will undertake this review tomorrow. --K. Peake 16:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Super, thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:22, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Thanks.
 * "and mimics the rhythm" → "and mimicking the rhythm"
 * Done.
 * "and certainly pretended to play it" → "certainly pretending to play it"
 * Done.
 * Use double speech marks instead for "screw"
 * Done.
 * Add a sentence mentioning Fred Åkerström's recording at the end of the lead, as this is notable
 * Done.

Background

 * Good
 * Noted.

Music and verse form

 * Add relevant text to the audio sample to justify its usage
 * Done.
 * Wikilink cello
 * Done.
 * Pipe time to Duple and quadruple metre
 * Done.
 * Wikilink timbre
 * Not done, the article is about the quality of a tone, not the meaning here.
 * "on the 3rd and 4th lines," → "on the third and fourth lines," per MOS:NUM
 * Done.

Lyrics

 * Img looks good!
 * Noted.
 * "It is subtitled" → "The composition is subtitled" to avoid overusage of it
 * Done.
 * Remove commas around Paul Britten Austin
 * Done.
 * Versions of the start of Epistle No. 2 → Starting lines of Epistle No. 2
 * Done.

Reception and legacy

 * Imgs look good!!
 * Thanks.
 * Remove wikilink on cello in prose
 * Done.
 * Remove wikilink on cittern
 * Done.
 * Pipe tuning pegs to Tuning mechanisms for stringed instruments
 * Done.
 * Wikilink folk music
 * Done.
 * "recorded it also on his 1974 studio album Glimmande Nymf, where it was" → "also recorded the song on his 1974 studio album Glimmande Nymf, where it was included as"
 * Reworded.
 * Wikilink flute
 * Done.
 * Pipe classical to Classical music
 * Done.

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 07:40, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
 * - all done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:59, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, quick response once again! --K. Peake 07:06, 20 June 2022 (UTC)